Well..
I thought it was cute. A couple of thoughts though.
1. The contrast is too low between the text and background. It makes it hard to read. You may want to try a lighter shade of grey for your background or something brighter for your text.
2. The music was nice and cute, but as with any games or whatever you should always include a mute (especially when some of the links bring you to other pages (animations) with sound.
I understand that this is something related to your profile design for a site I have nothing to do with, so I can't really say anything about it's appropriateness with relation to that site. So.. 3/5 6/10