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Dollie- Gaia Flash Profie

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Hello NG!

Just submitting my latest flash thingy-thing for you guys to tell me what you think. c:

This one is a flash profile for the website Gaia Online. This project had a few new things in it, like I've never linked out of my flashes before. I was so worried they wouldn't work because my browser kept saying things like 'Should I allow _______ to access the internet??' and it was just crazy. lol

Anyway, I can't remember where the music came from, I found it on my computer and think it came from a royalty free website, but I'm not sure. If anyone knows where the music came from, that'd be amazing of you to tell me. c:

And, that's all! >u<
I would like constructive criticism of what I could do better next time.
I'm practicing to be able to get into actual money commissions soon.

Thank you! n.ny

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Well..

I thought it was cute. A couple of thoughts though.

1. The contrast is too low between the text and background. It makes it hard to read. You may want to try a lighter shade of grey for your background or something brighter for your text.

2. The music was nice and cute, but as with any games or whatever you should always include a mute (especially when some of the links bring you to other pages (animations) with sound.

I understand that this is something related to your profile design for a site I have nothing to do with, so I can't really say anything about it's appropriateness with relation to that site. So.. 3/5 6/10

SchizophrenicSmile responds:

Thank you very much!

And, the thing is, the actual resolution of this flash is much larger than what newgrounds is showing, so, on my website, it reads perfectly fine, but thank you very much for pointing that out!

I have yet to figure out how to put a pause and play button for music yet, but I will figrure it out in due time! c:

Thank you so, very, very much!! n_n

dont mean to be offensive

but ...all this for a profile?, its not even a game.

I quite like the design and the style, as well as the effort you seem to put there (though the typography is a little bit small) but I dont get the idea of submitting something that has nothing to do with animations or games.

Anyways, just leaving my 2 cents

SchizophrenicSmile responds:

all this just for a profile~<3

I wanted to be unique on the website, and you'll be surprised to see what all sorts of other crazy things other people do for their profiles.

anyways, it doesn't say it's an animation or game, it's a gadget, which means that it's more of like an app of sorts.

I'm terribly sorry it's not your cup of tea, but thank you for reviewing anyway. c:

Love it

It's so cute i love it nice work c:

SchizophrenicSmile responds:

thank you very much~<33

Cool...

I guess.

SchizophrenicSmile responds:

thank you~

<(^^)>

Well, it quite the original idea, wich must be rewarded! Also, I like the loader.

SchizophrenicSmile responds:

thank you very much~<3

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Uploaded
Dec 11, 2010
9:59 AM EST