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I'm a Ball.(2010)

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My first flash submission, though this is a test, i'm also 25% wanting this as a Turd of the Week.


Other than than that, Enjoy!


*edit*-This actually could get Underdog of the week for my first 4 good reviews!

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nice ball

I'm a ball?

I guess you were just trying to make something really simple, but it did not work well because so little was actually happening. It was just these shapes talking. Oh wait, were you trying to get into the shape meme of cartoons here? Whatever your intention was, there needs to be a lot more action going on and many more jokes. Seeing as how this was "experimental" I guess it wasn't supposed to make any sense. Congradulations on working on your first independent cartoon, I suppose.

The only good part about this were that the lines were drawn pretty well. It was far too short and needed to have far more going on. I guess it works as a test but you should know that on this website it is generally not polite to submit things that are simply tests. Too bad you did not win the Underdog Of The Week award. Have more going on with more jokes for a higher score!

doppler73 responds:

Let me guess, I'm a Ball 2?

Also, FYI, doppler14 did the voices.

I've seen a lot of 1st flashes

But this one isn't bad enough to make turd of the week in my opinion. The colors are solid with two definite characters both with a purpose. The ball starts the conversation while the square asks how he is doing. I could see a continuation of stupid shorts like this come up and I wouldn't mind watching a few for a quick laugh. This isn't a bad start seeing as though many just insert pictures with absolutely no clarity throughout the flash; that type of crap is just painful. This on the other hand was slightly enjoyable, but definitely not worthy of any awards. Good start anyway and with time, I think you could put out something worthwhile.

doppler73 responds:

Why, Thank you. :)

lollllllllllllllll

i tinks you will get wat you 25% want lol but tast not bad for a first flash

doppler73 responds:

Thanks!

Its Finnnnnnne

it has voice acting and for a first submit thats pretty good XD.

doppler73 responds:

The voice is by doppler14, give the voice credit to him.

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Score
3.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 11, 2010
12:05 AM EST
Genre
Experimental
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