Nice

So I really like the art style of this game has some really nifty design about it and it's pretty cool that you won front page award on this was really nifty stuff here so nice work there I think you could have added more to it though like more stuff to do it just seemed short

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A very game so maybe adding more to it may be an idea

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Well, that was rather strange. It was one of the shortest games I ever played. Then again, maybe I did something wrong. Did I die? Well, I guess I did when I jumped off the building. It was certainly nice.

I appreciate how it is pretty artsy. It just made little sense. I must have missed something. I think I beat the game at least. The music was great too.

Despite it being kind of dull, I was starting to ask questions after reading the text. Like "Why am I late?" "Well why aren't you ever on time?" "You first?" "You gonna pay for my bills?"

omg so for the past few days ive been playing all the games in the "Art Games" playlist and so many of them involve suicide, yet... i didnt expect this to happen, even after he was like "why am i late?"

Pretty good and satirical. I like it.