Nice work
So for your "FIRST" big project it seemed to come out ok, Sometimes flash or whatever software used doesnt always work as one wants, but anyways thanks for the backround story, Now as for the "ANIMATION" itself the view of it is like an opinion im pretty positive its nothing like that, but we all have different views so its understandble, your animation was decent here besides the dropping in and out at times, a nice film here thanks for the effort put into this.
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It dropped in and out at times but was nothing too major.
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