plot could have been good, but it was ruined by the suckyness. listen and listen well.
1) you need a pre-loader, nothing like making every one wait for a long ass time for practically nothing.
2) audio!! It's boring with out sound affects or dialogue or ANY THING.
3) don't take pictures of guns and put them in your flash, either make your own weapons or draw the gun right
and 4) it's not that smooth flowing, it fits together, but what makes it like silk to my eyes?
fiannly 5) What is the plot for this? where's the story? i want a reason for violence, i want to know a reason for some one to some how randomly turn into a cyborg. (which makes no sense in the first place)
BUT, you are far better at flash than me, im giving you good advice to make it in here at NG, if you can make it here you can make it any where, but to make it here it takes much skill.
keep trying and practicing