look at this, it is unfinished but the reason im doin this is because i want tips from the community and ideas. if u have ideas plz comment. the story is that goku has to regain energy to kill margin bu so vagita grows sum tits and sings sum music to destract bu. i also like to take the piss out of how the people in dbz talk
Completely Agree..
I agree completely with EsTeaEfYou.. There was barely a little bit of animation.. The Drawings were preety good . . . At least some of them.. But the rest was bad!! And to sum everything up . . . Lady Gaga.. On DBZ . . Honestly this is not a good animation at all.. Try working on your animation and music familiarization and maybe you'll make some progress..
Wow
Wow, these people are way to nice. The animations were horrible. Nearly no more then 10 actual images. And you used the same mouth movements looped over again and again for both Vegeta and Goju. The audio was horrible and out of sync. This only shows a lack of compassion not only to animation but to those who are watching it. It was an eyesore. About the only thing I did enjoy was the song, though it didn't seem to fit the situation regardless of how off key it was.
well
first of all, the voicing wasnt very good. it was off sync and sounded kinda weird. next, it went on a while that they were just saying what happened and didnt get to the joke. however, when that song played when vegeta powered up, i admit i did laugh a little. however, it went on for very long and no other jokes were made. the background was also just blue with a little bit of clouds at times. Also, after the video, the music is still on at the title screen. the artwork and animation however wasnt that bad, except for the buu transformation, which wasnt that great. i wish i could think of more postive things to say, but i cant. im giving you a 5 cuz this was ur 2nd animation.
sups
ok , beeing someone who knows nothing about DBZ or really about animateing at all this short really doesnt make eny sense to me. If you want to make a good flash it should be engageing to enyone. Besides that i guess i could say animate better : P but thats just unfair i think.
I guess my main feedback could be do something you can really watch and think "i did really good here". cheers
Uhhh
good but its off sync and the drawings are ok. you need to include the music to avoid copyright.