quite simplistic
the storyline was quite believable
but the animation of him turning round at the end was crap
the title says it all. its first flash movie i have ever attempted so gimme some feedback on it
quite simplistic
the storyline was quite believable
but the animation of him turning round at the end was crap
I also Newgrounds was pretty damn ghetto back in the day. I thought this place was supposed to be filled with nerds who like hentai and shit. But I guess not apparently.
To be fair though at least this guy can actually draw compared to most submissions at the time so I'll let it off with a 2.5/5
hmmm
drawings were simple, but fit their purpose pretty well, you should have fbf'd the turnaround of the kid rather than doin the flip which shows 2 dimentionality, there could have been more detail facewise, but it didn't really bother me too much. The pacing of this could have been a little faster, but all in all you have an ok flash.
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~~REVIEW~~
Could have been better, it was over before i had a chance to see it all, and another thing it loopped over and over which was not good i could have been getting a soda and comeback in the middle or something, anyways it was ok, seems like it would be better in a game
though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code to stop the loopingh, and add more scenes, make it longer, aswell as more characters...
~~OVERALL~~
Short and ok song just needs more effort and some fix's in the flash...
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It was alright.
My main problem was basically the lack of faces. The kinda made the flash feel weird, adn you certainly had the ability to make them if you could make those veyr good backgrounds. The textboxes beign used as opposed to voices was disappointing though. The animation was very good though, and most of your points are pretty much lost due to lack of voices, although the textboxes were cool.