Good job
For a first flash it's not too bad, needs audio but you said you tried so it's ok. I would typically rate this a 3 or a 4 but i read your description and I am rating it a 8/10 and a 4/5 because you seem to have a lot of potential and you asked me to go easy on it :D
Keep it up, I hope i didn't put my vote to waste :D