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Girls Can't Sword Fight

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Just a little toon made for a film contest. Jasper did not tell me the contest was on tuesday!
This is dedicated to my neihbor Savannah who seems to hurt kids on "Accident" when she plays boy games.

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flash

what version of flash do you use


Jom responds:

When I made that I used flash 8 Pro but now I use Cs3.


RIGHT IN THE FACE

nice one, the overall production quality was quite good and the character designs were great. My only suggestion would be to loosen up and try things with frame by frame animation. The results might not look spectacular but you'll keep moving forward and improving. Just one quick shot of her winding up and swinging the sword at him would've made this so much more powerful! :D


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Jom responds:

Yes I am a FBF animator now and thats why there havent been much submissions. I've been trying to get real good before my next appearence :)
This means alot to have you comment :D


Good Character Art

Better than the usual squiggly lined characters. Nice job.



really good

it was a nice little short with good animation, it was just a little too short for me, but still good, also sound was a little weird toward end of sentences (i dont know if it was cause of my computer or not) but still good



Hehe

I like the simplistic Idea of it all, and grats on winning some moneys!!

The only reason i didnt pop you a 10 was the sound had a reverberation quality to it.. at least it sounded like it to me. Just that in a bathroom while talking thing...other than that I loved it.


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Jom responds:

Thank you so much! no really people like your comments make me feel great :)

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Score
2.92 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 15, 2010
3:58 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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