Keep it up...
One suggestion (and this is a big one), please get a better microphone. At least get a cheap foam POP blocker to go over the mic you have. It is very distracting and unprofessional. Also, you should take some time and study about sound editing. Pay attention to the pauses between your edits. They are too quick sometimes and it makes the flow of this work too rough. Even media that is not for entertainment purposes should be done well. Plus, you know that you are an ambassador, and the quality of your work should not distract from the power of the message.
were did you get that picture of the bird? i really like it
What point are you trying to convey exactly? Who or what are you arguing against or for? Are you trying to teach people something? Whatever it is the point was lost on me as nothing you said struck me as anything new nor did it seem to actually have a point. It's just you pointing out parts of the Bible and reading them and seeing how they compare with other verses. You were basically preaching. You really did not refute anything so you're not really exposing any lies. If this was meant for non-believers than you'll have to do more than read Bible verses to get them to listen to you. They don't believe that the Bible is truth so obviously they aren't going to care what it's in it. If this was for skeptics that feel betrayed by the church then how does this help them? They hear preaching all the time so what is different about what you're saying? I'm genuinely trying to understand what you meant this to be other than rambling.
Technically speaking, your voice work was quite horrid and monotone. A new mic might be in order if you plan to keep this up as well you improving your speaking talent.
I understand where you're coming from and I guess I should've been more specific. To refute lies is the overall point of this series, yes, but this is the first episode and I am new to this sort of thing.
Basically, my whole point this episode was to prove that Jesus has been around since the beginning, not just the new testament. I apologize for not making that clear. Proving this fact is serious because it changes everything we've come to know as Christianity, which I'll prove in further episodes.
ooohh!!! come on!!!
ok being as objective as mi anti christian ass can be...
first, you can´t just come here and tell everything you like about religion, (why ?), because, you are dealing with issues u sooner or later realize are very controversial, i know that the slogan of new grounds is everything by everyone, but you and all christian, catolic, budist, satanic, israel, and who the f*** else, need to know that if you belive in something, belive it you own way, and that also goes for the people you dedicated the message, dont let anybody mess with your deity
ps: sorry if i offended anyone by making this review that wast me intention, peace
First of all. I never claimed to know all of anything. I was taught this just like anybody else. This isn't about opinion or politics. This is about the fine print that most preachers and everyday "anti-christians" like yourself fail to read and understand.
Well, this is a type of submision you don't see too often. I listened to most of the vid, but I wasn't entirely sure what lie(s) you were trying to disprove.
In all honesty, no matter how well you present your opinions or facts, informational flashes like this are never well accepted on this site, especially religious, as I'm sure you'll see from some other reviews. I'd suggest avoiding this site for this type of submittion. It won't be appreciated here.
Also, I think you spoke just a bit monotonous, and read direct scripture a little too much, with not enough exposition.
If you listened to "most" of the vid then you'd have something to say about it. I warned you this wasn't about entertainment.
Regardless of negative reviews, it has to be done.
Also, this isn't a matter of opinion. If there is a set written record and description of the way things should be done or viewed, that is the way it is. Period.
I mean, do you go into your math class a tell the teacher that 1+1 = 6 and pass saying it's your personal opinion? NO. And it's the same deal with the bible. All these denominations, Jehovah's witness, Baptist, Catholic and so on aren't even supposed to exist.
Thanks for the review.