I dont know
I dont know what happened at all. Everything can be improved on substantially.
They're being too hard on you...
I dont know what was going on, but this isnt too bad. The doodles were pretty good. There needs to be more animation. The sounds were kinda funny, but try to keep them at around the same volume next time so that people dont have to keep their finger on the volume button while they watch (in case theres a really loud noise all of the sudden).
I think this shows potential, its surely better than the average stuff that comes through here nowadays from your age group. :) Keep at it!
This isn't even animation, its crap. Nothing made any sense, you just hired a three-year old to draw octopuses and copied it onto flash. Now I don't mean to be rude, but it was horrible and I hated it. Next time when you make a flash, actually animate it, take more time drawing it, add some voice/text so we know whats going on and don't add random sound effects to make it seem more "real". Think before you post.
No, I drew the octopus all by myself.
I HAVE NO TIME FOR ANIMATING BECAUSE I GOT SCHOOL WORK!
Makes no sense
I'm sure it made sense in your head, but you need to better explain it.