uber boring
well drawn ish and animated but i was bored out my skull
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After a very tiring 3 months in production, I have finally realized this flash movie's end.
However it is not quite as expected since there is still a few dialogues missing, mainly from the persons i have "assigned" to do some voice acting.
To summarize the story,
Gelo finds an unexpected source of help and,,,, who knows what else... >=) in the form of a female pilot named Alex. we shall see what happens in the next episodes.
The 2nd Air Army also receives new commanding officers, officers who are really professional about their job. (compare Rory to Sixto in episode 1)
The First Vertian Mechanized Legion led by Field Commander Lantano approaches the city of Maya-Nilad after rampaging through Gaddil, Uleki Territory, and absolutely decimating all the armies that stood against them - the New Malachaian Armies (modeled after the Reds - Russians), Aegean infantry divisions (Japanese), Ritannian Royal Tank corps (British), and the hapless Malachaian battalions (mix of influences). of course this happened "off-screen" as this is just an explanation of how things transpired in the movie.
Time to start planning the storyboard for the next episode.
Almost didn't watch the whole thing
If it wasn't for NitrogenousBeing down there, I would have missed all the hard work after the text. Honestly, when most people see text scrolling from the bottom, they immediately dismiss it as credits and close the video. I'm sure the reason why this doesn't have a higher rating might have something to do with them thinking it was a one-minute video... And it might have something to do with not being able to understand a word that anyone was saying...
RPRMT0054611 responds:
that's why i put in the subtitles! if the reason they can't understand what the characters are saying is because of the "accent" then boo to you, my friend. That happens to a lot of my friends going international. (I am a true-blue Filipino; a rather educated one at that. peace!) however, taking your point, the text rolling part does seem to lack ,,, how you guys say it, "pizazz"? episode 3 won't disappoint, i promise you that. XD
wth I almost missed the action scenes
What in the world were you thinking when you made such a long text and blank pause between the intro and the action I thought the intro was the whole episode and the text was the end credits. I wouldn't have noticed the action after it if I hadn't left the window open to do something else.I advise shortening the action-less pauses cause the pacing is all weird. Also this would benefit from clearer audio.
RPRMT0054611 responds:
points taken. there's supposed to be a "conversation" in the rolling text part. (points finger at lazy partner who never turned up the other voices) but i'll try to improve on this come episode 3.