Ha that was really good!
The reviews beneath mine may seem harsh but it's becuase of ttheir perspective. Sound would've been nice and the text more organized. I actually like the color scheme you used by the way.
Anyway, the story is experessed in a very awkward but good in a way, the animation is pretty good! Well the more movies you make the better they'll get so good luck. And yes, my review os very unorganized i noticed :D