Potential
Had potential, but didn't quite get there
Author Comments
This is my first proper animation submission. It's testing my ability to lip sync and minor animations aswell as vocal recordings.
This is nothing serious.
All criticism is welcomed aswell as advice.
Enjoy.
Edit: Thanks for all your responses. (:
HAHAhAH
very simple but funny
Well...
I actually found it rather amusing. I liked the voices, however everything else seemed a little bland.
well
it may be crap but the lip synch was ungodly compared to other shit people spew out so i give you an 8.
good luck with future flash!
l8s
Your flash was decent!
The lip-sync looked good.
You could work a bit on the animation in the future. Try adding some color, perhaps give the people elbows, and a background.
Sound was decent. Not much more than voice acting but it got the job done.
The flash did have a little humor. Judging by just this submission alone, you have some potential. Keep practicing. 4/10 2/5