Good

Plot and Music is great. Your art style is not bad, but you need to try and work on your frame consistency on the animation. the animation is just a little too rough... though keep it up.

Over time, I am sure you will do better.

could be better...

great plot, and theme....

but, the animation was quite bad. Put more effort into it, don't just rush.

i like this flash

o yea i like this flash, but i really dont understand the message.... explain it to me please.

p.s. - music goes well with this flash.....