You are destined for sucking.
How about some stop motion drawing next time.
Take a look at Richard Williams' stuff.
Coulda been funnier was slightly entertaining didnt really like the milk trip try adding longer story the disco of cows was great Words... Or a more professional Chat bubble better music for something more suiting to a comedy
it was ok the story was not to bad but you should have done some voices and you could of worked on it a little longer on it.