Eh...
I'll give it a nine to support you as it's your first submission, but the voice acting needs improving. Still though, it's pretty good.
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This is my first Flash video, and my first upload to Newgrounds. So tell me what you think of it.
good
i actually really liked it.
but one thing didn't make sense in the story: how did he get to those places?
i mean, he was watching the girl posing from the front, how can he slap her ass?
and the referee was very small in the TV, he would've hit not only the referee, but 4-5 other players.
but other that that i liked it.
i'd have to say
you didn't do bad. great first!
What....?!
I didn't really think this was funny or well wrote it confused me, you've got a good idea. just needs work id like to see an improved version =)
