needs more fighting X(
Its nice but...
...Like you said in the commentary, your fighting animation skill needs some improvement, but its far from catastrophic. Just practice your body position drawing from fighting picture or video.
Your drawing talent are inscontestable, mostly for the froozen sequence (faces, static position, shadow and light).
Story looks nice for a 30 secs anim, caracters look cool.
Keep it up!!!
8/10 --- 5/5 (The 5 for encouragement!!)
the king say
a flash is a flash!
hey, at least this is somethin! just keep practicing! with your artwork and skill, i'm sure you'll do lots better! ^^ this is just the beginning!