Needs Improvment
Use a higher quality sound, so it doesnt sound like you recorded it off the radio... And it's too repetitive, get more detailed, a better background, better movement, and so on. This might be acceptable if this was a first try
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Okay Go -----> http://who-of-who.deviant art.com/
To see the other Red Vs Blue Episode. Thats the Site I use Most and it has lots of other stuff on it:
The Hip Dad
Red Vs Blue
and lots of other stuff!
So comment and review.
And and Red Vs Blue Comes from my head go to the other ones and see its not a stolen idea...
Thanks Who-Of-Who
Needs more effort.
Just spend about 3 more hours working on it, and improve the walking animation, the background, and the plot, and then it would come out good.