Nice job!
I love seeing my music put to action! This got me soo pumped! Great job, keep it up!
Author Comments
This is my first animation ina while i decided to work with sprites that i made myself hopefully you like it :)
chipcartoons responds:
Im glad you did! i thought your song would be perfect for my cartoon! thanks for the music! :)
GOOD : |
It needs more sound effects. Then it would have SUPER COOL! :)
chipcartoons responds:
Oh yes it would im going to start on the sequel right now! :D
This Was Awsome For A First Time
Epic For A First Time You Owned All Other First Timers
chipcartoons responds:
Thanks!! :D
Well done, but...
It was well done, but there were a few things of note:
-The file size was huge for how short the flash itself was. Maybe start reading up on how to reduce your file size.
-There were a few animated spots (ie. the laser eyes) that just seemed like you got lazy. While it may not seem like much, those small spots detract from the beautifully drawn rest of the animation.
-A little more story-line and development would bring so much more depth. Why are there doodles? Were they drawn and went rogue? Why is our 'hero' fighting them? Etc.
A great start - keep up the good work. I think you have a nice style that with a little practice and tuning could go a long way.
chipcartoons responds:
Mhmm i shall! im going to look for tuts and books on how to make it look better thnks alot !! :)
good job
I can tell this is a first timer flash. I think you did a good job. I can't wait for your next flash. I will root for you.
chipcartoons responds:
woot woot :D thank you it really means alot!
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Daily 4th Place October 25, 2010