No sound: no emotion

It looked like a school project, something about making an advertising about drunk-driving. That was an easy subject.

Sad you didn't add sound at all. You should have put something on, even a simple song, just to entertain our ears while we're watching.

Also, work on your animation. That was a good beginning, but to get knowned, you'll have to practice and creat your own style.

Try again and put more effort on it, even if you have to wait for your speakers to be repared.