Ohh my... :)
Teeheehee! I loved it so much! :) Please make more, sir! Heehee!
*doom voice* "Dawud... Grrr!"
*claps* Yay! :D :D :D
Author Comments
Assalamualaikum & a very good day to you!
Here is the sequel to the previous part, Submission Day! As the titled said, it's a submission day for the creative study students, in fact it's the second day! Watch how our hero in this part, Dawud take on the world by storm to help himself out during the presentation with the lecturer.
Enjoy the story, I think it fit most the viewer complaint of the series being very short n all. This one is much more longer... Hope it work for ya! Join our Facebook page, Youtube channel. Do vote wisely (LOL) & do drop your opinion!
PS : The credit are pretty long for some of you guys, dont low rate it because of it pls. I juz want to be grateful to those who helped me.
Blakant responds:
lol, thx for the positive feedback man :D
Alright!!
This is by far the funniest one so far. What I didn't expect, though, was (as mentioned before) the art style. I just assumed that style was only going to be in the shorts and that this one was going to be in the same style as Submission Day 1.
I understand the lack of time there might be when your working on many projecst as once but does this style really save time animating? You already have a stock collection of expressions/ hand movements from the previous episode so you could save time by re-using some previously drawn and animated things. I respect your freedom in creative choice, but the old style DID make the series look more appealing.
In terms of writing I have noticed a large improvement: There is a much more established plot line then in the last one. The first one got hazy because of a couple of overdone gags, for example the failed suicide attempt. It was presented in a way that made it look like it was an important part of the story, but is then ignored for the rest of the episode.
What ever you decide: Im sure this series will keep growing and will reach for the stars if things keep going the way they do!
Also, Mr.Killer has the most epic laugh of all time. xD
Blakant responds:
okay! as for the art style, we rlly saved alot of time by using this kind of art style. so also did a more simplified cartoon bcuz we want to make more shorty in the future & weare thinking that the shorty will mke no sense so simplified such as this wont make it look horror juz incase we wan tto chop a character head off or something..lol
thx for the review! :D
Sorry, too boring
The start was great, very funny and I laughed. But the part with Mr. Killer (which was the main part of the movie) was simply plain boring.
The graphics are damm good, no doubt, voice acting was good (no need to worry, Strider-M), but the story-telling needs improvement. I'm sure that would bring your movies in the Top-5 !
Blakant responds:
more storyteelin, aye!
Great!
I wish I could do Mr. Killer's part again... I sound muffled compared to the other characters =/
Blakant responds:
we did spent some time to take out some noise.... hoping to see u in the next project & be more active in our fb page man (if u haf fb account :P)
huh...
I liked parts of it a lot but got bored in between... it's probably just the mood I'm in. Overall it was pretty good though.
Blakant responds:
hope ur mood to get btter man. thx for the review
