A nice concept and all, but checkpoints every level might be a nice addition.
And maybe a little more directions on what to touch and what not to touch.
Storyline was interesting too, it has potential!
PS: Comic sans wouldn't be the font of my choice ;)
Really it wasn't that great. The music choice was nice. Other than that, I understand it was your first official game and we all have to start somewhere but, it wasn't anything special.
Just didnt flow right...idk im not trying to be mean...its good but not great =)
Very interesting play
I found this quite an interesting maze game to play and was almost expecting it to be a typical 'screamer'. I like how you've tried to turn this into a narrative game. The graphics kinda let it down a little, but otherwise a good effort for your first time. I'm not sure whether I've completed it yet or not, but I've enjoyed what I played so far.