This is a cartoon focused completely on violence, although judging from the quality and the fact it's a stick movie, this comes as no true surprise. Immediately that fact drains quite alot of substance from the animation as a whole, with nothing to wrap my head around why do I feel involved at all?
There is no premise or reason to this senseless violence, and from what I've seen it was not meant to be random or comical in any way what so ever.
I'm sure you must have a decently creative mind being on this sight, suredly you could come up with some sort of character even if it's a stick. Give him a distinctive feature and a specific reason for murdering masses of other sticks if you are going to go about a series like this.
Otherwise this is just a simple practice animation, with simple sound and graphics. I ask you to consider what you're submitting to the portal before throwing it up and understand that the newgrounds community will not find this fufilling (As it serves no other purpose than practice) in much a way of any other stick movie, it simply takes space in the portal.
I'm honestly not trying to be harsh or victimize you in any way, I just want you to understand that if you're going to submit something to the portal try to keep it significant. Otherwise simply use the dumping grounds to store practice animations (And if you want criticism make a topic on the Forums then link it so people may see it.) or keep it on your computer and show it to some friends before submitting.
If you have any questions you can PM me, I'll answer anything you ask.
Keep on animating, and I beg that you get a microphone of some kind in your years so that the stories you create can finally take actual life.
I hope this helped you understand the Newgrounds community.