Good job in the end, bro.
I reward you Nine out of Ten mostly because I, as told before, no voices....see, even the people below say so. Told you so, you should do it in Episode 2
Author Comments
Alright, this is my first FINISHED flash animation. Yay! I am a little worried uploading to Newgrounds right now, because I don't know what you guys might think of it, but I guess you have to start somewhere, right?
Anyways, I got early complaints saying the text went by to fast, and rather than de-synchronize some of the audio, I thought I could make a system where it will stop the animation and ask you to press any key on the keyboard when you are done reading long bits of dialogue.
I hope to have voices in Episode 2 if you guys like this and give me motivation to make another, but for now this will have to suffice. Enjoy! :)
-Phobos001
Hmm...
I dunno..not bad for a first video. I hope i see better in the future! I LOLed wen the coke went OMG HE FLLY AWAY WTF THT AWSM SHIT FUCK! LOL XD
I love it!
You have a good sense of humor.
The animations look unique but could have used a little bit more effort.
Overall I laughed my ass off..
9/10, 5/5, faved.
good
not bad
Very well done
You did very well for a first flash. I can read all the text at the start quite easily except one of the lines which i missed 1-2 words off the end. It should be slowed down a tad for people to be able to read it easily and more casually. Apart from that it's smooth and well done. The animation is enjoyable and the visuals are also, i especially like the gun ;). Good work, I can see you becoming a good flash animator in time. good luck, heres a head start.
10/10
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2.80 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Oct 8, 2010
- 10:49 PM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Parody