A good theme for starters, animation wasn't too bad and so on.
I think what failed this in the end was the last bit, where he was puking? O.o Whatever it was at the end, it was way too long, and it made people, well me anyway, lose focus of whatever message you were trying to put out; seemed the flash was about spending too much time on games is a waste of life? I don't know :S ...and how can you call this comedy its rather depressing.
Still, it was a good concept I suppose. Try and take this comment constructively, because it's meant to be. Better luck next time :)