yeah i remember when i first got my massive tablet
... it was awesome.
The drawings in this flash were great. But the lines were a bit dodgy.. you need to work on drawing your lines smoother. I liked it how you animated to the music. Good shit.
Well done - 4/5
Yeah, I always had problems with lines, the way I draw works well on paper, but since I started drawing on the computer I'm having a lot of trouble getting rid of all those years of dodgy lines and bad drawing habits.
Thanks for your review! =)
Nice little animation, music is fitting story is fine, I would have kept the dream parts pencil colored all during the movie, it would have given a troubleless childhood feeling, I really love the negative images in it also, some conclusion or the phisicall presentation of the emotions could have benne a bit more detailed and expanded, cause it's now doesn't feel like it has a proper end.
I give an 8.
I'm glad you liked it. And, I agree with your review. I don't like the ending either, but couldn't figure out another ending that would fit with the music timing.
You have some serious potential.
I may not have much to review, but I've been on this site quite awhile, and what you display here is some talent. Your animation isn't as smooth as others', but you have decent art skills and for a beginning flash submitted to Newgrounds, it's better than expected and way better than the average starting flashes. If you want to get better, maybe the flash tutorials on this site will help you, but with time comes experience. Great work, and I hope to see you again one day for winning an award.
Thank you very much, I will keep practicing. =)
And I'm pretty sure you will see me soon getting some awards! I'm working on flash nonstop. Actually, my last submission got a daily 4th. Check it out, it have chainsaws like your username! =P