dude that's not bad. The first few seconds made me think that it was going to be fairly dull but that soon changed. Made me laugh on quite a few bits. You certainly have strengths in storyboarding and script writing and funny faces. Also the timing of the actual frames was quite well done which gave the comedy a nice pacing. I think that this got a low rating because of it seeming unfinished with no audio and little shading or colors, but hey it was still entertaining and thats all that counts on newgrounds. Good job. I see by your'e profile that youe quite a capable artist. Why not show that off?