dude that's not bad. The first few seconds made me think that it was going to be fairly dull but that soon changed. Made me laugh on quite a few bits. You certainly have strengths in storyboarding and script writing and funny faces. Also the timing of the actual frames was quite well done which gave the comedy a nice pacing. I think that this got a low rating because of it seeming unfinished with no audio and little shading or colors, but hey it was still entertaining and thats all that counts on newgrounds. Good job. I see by your'e profile that youe quite a capable artist. Why not show that off?

it needs improvment

it would be better if it had music,sond,voices,and color

kinda funny

probably would have been a better web comic.

awesome, though

dude, i really liked it. maybe we can collab and make this into a full blast animation with sound and shit. hit me up if ur interested.

I Liked It!

I have to say, as crude as it was, I enjoyed the artwork. This is a flash that I'd really like to see with sound and more animation. I think that's something you should definitely work toward. Regardless, I found it to be fairly enjoyable.

~Tovi~