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MY FIRST GAME THAT IS NOT FINISHED SHOULD BE FINISHED IN 2 DAYS...

TALK SHIT ALL YOU WANT LET ME KNOW WHAT I CAN DO BETTER

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What?

Sorry but I did not see the point of this. It could be cool but it needs a full plot.

Wofolz responds:

Thank you sir...there was no point except to learn a little program to see what I was able to do...I really wanna run with this because the more I think about it the more I come up with so thank you for letting me know a lil about what you would like more you know so I can learn more...

Fun

I enjoyed playing it and trying out all the choices which were funny, but for the full game I do think that it would not get high ratings in its current form.

Wofolz responds:

Yea you're right its not for ratings though I just wanted to see what would happen and it actually ahs been more positive than I thought...thanx

Good

Very good game

Wofolz responds:

hahaha thank you very much I'm just glad SOMEONE likes it lol...theres more where that came from(once I learn more haha)....

Try agian, but take your time.

While this game was an... intresting... way to spend about 3 minutes, its not good enough to last. While the art can stay the way it is, the choices should be less of a coin flip. This kind of game (IE, an interactive flowchart) is only fun when wit replaces already mundane expectations. If your going to "suprise" someone with death, DONT INSULT THE PLAYER! Running infront of a taxi becuase your an idot makes the player feel bad. Geting into a taxi, and then dieing when they realise that the driver is infact a rabid bear, might be more intresting. Also, make the choices not have such imediate results. Someone makes a mistake, let them try to fix it. If they dont fix it, then kill them. Other wise its just bumping up agenst walls untill you find your way out. As I said, try agian. And dont post unfinished work. It gives you a bad name, and will only lower your self esteem. (posting a DEMO or an ALPHA is fine, as long as its labled as such. Good Luck.

Wofolz responds:

HAHAHA yes true all this stuff did come just off the top of my head and you are really right I should take my time on this before I publish it, but it was just a test and shit I got FOUR comments I didn't expect ANYONE to look at this. But thank you for taking the time for looking at it and genuinely writing an honest opinion I will really consider your words when learning and applying my skills to a future project.

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3.24 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 26, 2010
7:18 PM EDT