absolutely loved it
but i felt sum of the voice acting was a lil outta place sorta felt like one of them japanese arcad games hah if that makes any sense but nonetheless i enjoyed it very much great job
lol thanks :D
this is awesome ^w^ wonderful voice actors as well. especially yoro! he sounds like solid snake XD super epic, i cant wait to see the next one (its going to be even better!)
Good but could use some touching up
Focusing only on the animation and story, i enjoyed this, and its a great start so far. There are some inconsistencies in the quality, but it gets better as it goes and i'm sure the next one will be even better. My one complaint would be that you need to differentiate your stickmen better. At times, its hard to tell who it is we're looking at because all of them have pretty much the same features. Since you focus so much on their eyes, i think the easiest thing to do would be to make all of their eyes a different shape.
My other big complaint is that the major fragments don't advance from one to the other on their own. They basically just stop at a black screen. I managed to watch each part individually, but that was still very annoying. I think the credits could have been better and showed off who did what voice since there is such great voice work on this thing! Finally, the subtitles need a proofread since there were some grammatical mistakes. Not anything that is ruining to the animation and overall I took a liking to it from start to finish.
Thanks for the review man :)
Actually your right about the features. I've already have been trying to make unique eye shapes for every character as a start, if i think of anything else that will help i'll throw it in as well.
And i'm not sure the full credits loaded for you because i was sure to put who voiced what in them. The movie does do that to some people unfortunately otherwise to runs fully without stopping. And lol yeah i typed too fast and make mistakes like that all the time, i'm watching out for that in the second episode :)
love the music! l look forward to a sequel :)
Amazing job bud
As you've already stated the whole stick figure thing is a bit of an undershot for you. I look at the quality of your art and the detail in most your scenes and it's not only good, it's great given that you used a mouse and all. The use of stick figures in a piece of work with the quality you've already exhibited is just selling your audience short.
While the artistic design of the environments had me immersed in the series, the second the characters stepped into the picture I lost my connection with the beauty of it all; they were/are lifeless and extremely boring to watch.
Seeing the eyes move across a 2 dimensional facial plane is heart wrenching as I look at the BG and see the intricately detailed props and pieces.
Please consider for future projects (not this series) to utilize your skill and breath the same air into character design as you did your environments and I suspect you'll be amongst the best of the best here on NG!