I can see you put some time into this.
Well, there were some facial expressions and... blinking!!! WHOA!
The premise was.... odd, to say the least. And the overall humor was a bit lacking.
In the end it really wasn't that funny, but you put some effort in this, and I don't think it desrves to be blammed.
I can only assume you are just starting out. With some practice and experience, your flashes should start looking good.