The Trainstation of Love

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Note: After tweek after tweek after tweek, I decided to resubmit with the Narrator removed. So if your getting a sense of Deja-vu, your not totally crazy.

A project I started on a while ago. Finally got around to finishing it.

Once upon a time a long long time ago, I was sitting at a bus-station and saw an attractive lady. Luckily I also had a notebook with me. A long time after I READ the notebook and the above video was born!

Any criticism is appreciated, thanks for watching.

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funny one

station hit on, right on

blank0000 responds:

not 100% sure what you're trying to say. But it seems like a compliment. Thanks!

Something like this happens to anyone.

I liked your submission, because I can identify with the main character: you get a shot with an attractive woman in a situation that can't be any better, yet somehow you screw up. This is definitely a good anymation portraying the steriotypical everyman.

The effects are decent. Nothing too flashy, but it isn't needed, as the story is quite simple.

Good job.

blank0000 responds:

best material comes from life right? glad you liked it :)

-also, thanks for the detailed review. Nice to hear an extended response. Awesome to see.


Good work. Next time try to add more music for the environment. It'll help you to catch more the attention of the viewers. Also you need to practise your voice.
That's all folk!

blank0000 responds:

Thanks meng :)

-originally the narrator sort of did that. He popped in throughout the story. However I felt like he was forced. Every had comments about him and not the actual animation.

if you know of any good sites for simple bg music let me know "I did try the audio portal, but I couldn't find anything that fit right"


Great unique animation, really funny dialogue.

blank0000 responds:

I thank you for such kind words :D

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3.30 / 5.00

Sep 17, 2010
1:45 PM EDT
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