keep up the good work
a short video, original and funny enough, but the animation and style of the drawings must be greatly improved.
I know it's your first job, but first or not, I'm not the kind of person that gives a good grade just for that, if a job is done badly it can not be considered good right?
But if you can improve these points and continue to find fresh ideas for your videos I'm sure they will have much more success.
3/5 - 5/10