This animation is quite good, but to be honest, this is perhaps one of the most terrifying animations you’ve ever made, at least in my opinion.

Unfortunately for me, NG crashes at some point during the video. At least there’s some potential for this… Good job, Nat.

Step off the train all alone at dawn, back into the hole where I was born, sun in the sky never raised an eye to me. See this town cease to be, it's what you got for sleeping with the enemy. An extraordinary guy can never an ordinary day, he might live a long goodbye, but that is not for me to say. Stand by me, nobody knows the way it's gonna be.

If I stumble catch me when I fall, 'cause baby after all, you'll never forget my name. Say something, you make me believe. You fade in-out! Don't go away, say what you say, say that you'll stay, forever and a day, 'cause I need more time, yeah I need more time just to make things right. Wash your face in the morning sun. All around the world, ya gotta spread the word, tell 'em what you heard. It's getting better man.

THIS ANIMATION RULES I LOVE THIS ANIMATION SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HHmmm

This flash is under rated a bit - this is a 2.75 to me
There's a story, background, okay animation and pretty good art - also this is his first flash and flash is HARD
I HATE REVIEWERS WHO DON'T HAVE FLASH!!

You've got talent, but...

I can tell by your ink and lines that you are talented in art, but the story doesn't make much sense; it just seems sort of random. This is better than _many_ first submissions, you should make another. Whether or not this gets blammed, _make another_. You will get better naturally, but you need to animate, and just do it.

I'm voting fairly, 5/10, but that doesn't mean I'm not eagerly awaiting your next movie. I am, in fact.

No idea what's going on

I have no idea what's going on here. And yes I've seen Final Destination. What does that have to do with pink and blue blobs?