Bleh
It seemed rushed, try to take your time on individual characters and voice acting. For example try to be as clear as possible when you read your lines so it doesn't come out sounding like you were mumbling, but good attempt anyways.
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Adrellia Village: Season 1, Episode 23:
That Ominous Feeling
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9/5/10 - That Ominous Feeling
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Runtime: 1:41
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You MUST watch the previous episodes before watching this.
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Drake and Rachel pay a visit to the Light Forest.
