Pretty alrite flash I guess but where's mario anyways I'll give u a full review in later videos since this is a preview
make a part 2 plz
great, awesome, cool!
make part 2
I like the concept you have going, it's a really good idea. You should do a second preview, but I'd work on the script a little bit, it's got some grammatical errors that really stand out. I'd be willing to help you with the scripting if you would be okay with that. But al and all, it looks like it will be a good series.