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good animation for the first episode real intense
Author Comments
This is the first episode of Victor Ventura: The Last Vampire.
I am still new to flash and this took a lot of hard work to pull off. Hopefully the upcoming episodes will keep getting better and better! Enjoy!
awesome
too short though
Lone-X responds:
Thanks, second one will be longer
Not Bad =]
I like the potential that this has.. I also really appreciate the complex story line that you're beginning to unravel - a good story line is what makes these series type of animations. I also like your drawing, the crudeness sort of adds something.. you just need to add more detail in regards to color and background features.. and as I'm sure you know, actual animating versus characters standing still as you narrate a story - unless you're going to try and pull off the whole series like that (which may prove difficult).
Overall? Good job, man. I'm actually sort of excited to see what this series has to offer in the future =]
Lone-X responds:
Thanks! I am going to add more background detail and color!
Well....
Its Okay just because you are new for flash 5/5.
this is considered a ruff
The sound and the drawings are all still in their first stages. Get a voice actor, there are plenty around, and spend some more time on the art side of things and maybe actually animate it. This is the first stage an animation goes through before it gets made, so there is still lots to do.
goodluck =)
Lone-X responds:
Well I am still a newb at flash. I don't even know how to move stuff in it yet. All the movement is done with my drawing frames in gifs that I imported to flash. I am learning though, I'll try new stuff for episode 2.
