Pretty okey
The animation was okay and I liked the style :D but like everyone said, it really was to short but I also like dthe music :)
Author Comments
21.
Stick time decided to finish this, planning to do another part but not right now. still short
practice of effects and stuff.
Reviews and critique are welcome.
EDIT:
fixed some minor errors
EDIT:
added in my sig at the start.
Don't forget to check out my other stuuff
DillonBrannick responds:
cheers man, yeah the music is pretty nice alright.
Thanks for 7 and the review
Yay! It came out!
I spot some potential! And look at you! Actually using the input from the people who write reviews. I already like you just for that. But I'm reviewing a flash so here I go. Once again your over all style is refreshing in the fact that I've never seen animation like this before, although it is nice to look at you need more substance to it. Simply having a stick man running around doing stuff is not going to captivate people. You don't seem to have problems animating so I tell you to push yourself in order to draw something more complex allowing your art style to show through and wow people. Lookin' forward to the next one. Take it easy.
DillonBrannick responds:
cheers man, I'm loving these constructive reviews that you give out. I'll try put a bit of storyline to it.
He's that last stick alive and his head was already taken in a vicious fight and now he runs in hope of staying alive.
nice
way to short but cool, nice song lol
DillonBrannick responds:
Thanks for the review
very short
but aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwsssssssssoooooooo ooooommmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee should at least be 1 min
DillonBrannick responds:
That's generally my worst problem I always want it to be done so I end it
Thanks for the review and the 10
to short...
it is nice, reminds me my notebook games when i was younger.
DillonBrannick responds:
I thought I might get a review like this. Anyway the reason I made it short is because I'm about to start the finished version of generic news episode 2 so sorry maybe in the second one I'll make it longer
Thanks for your review
