Useless product - great flash!
Wow, that was so funny, particularly with the way that you made an advert just to promote the product. I'd love to give you a few pointers just to make it a little better, so that the rest of the flash could benefit from not having to carry that part, since the background let you down and just having the woman fronting the product wasn't quite the best way to go, but it still worked out.
With the way that this piece worked, there were certainly some good gags and the animation was quirky and inventive. Just giving us the right way to put forward the gags, without making it look to crappy, or straight-laced.
I think that regardless of the fact that your writing has improved, you've certainly got it in you to produce some good work and the perceived lack of humour didn't hinder you - I thought it was quite funny anyway.
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