It sounded like you did all the effects and voices. Maybe get some help on that? You get different voices and its a ten. liked the humor but a little immature for my taste. though thats just my preference.
maybe you could work on the monky sound more, cause that sounded really fake. and 1, you should make the girls eyes the same size and2, try to make the eyes the same colour
thats done on purpose to show that she is insane, and the monkey sound was made by me. cartoons aren't meant to be REAL. so why dont you look at it like a cartoon and not like real life.
This was great man. I love random humor, and this has a lot of it! I hope to see more work like this from you in the future!
thank you VERY much.