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Doodles II

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Aug 23, 2010 | 8:48 PM EDT

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My second flash. Took me four hours to make. I think this is a huge improvement over Doodles, but tell me what you think!
Note: This has nothing to do with HG2G. I just thought the music fit.

Update: This thing is a train wreck. It's supposed to be four minutes long, the music has disappeared, it stops a quarter of the way through, and the animation is screwy!! The file is broken, let me upload a new one.

Update: I can't fix it. View what it was supposed to be here.
?bmqjsuh020jd7q2 If anyone can help, I'm using Anime Studio 5.



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

4 hours you say?

Well I think next time you would like to make an animation, have a point! Seriously their is that weird line thing in the beginning and why did it take him like 20 sec. to stand up? Nobody wants to watch a short animation where nothing is happening for 20 seconds; Another thing is he falls down when he kicks the robot thing why didn't he like flip off him or something or at least land?? But no he just falls to the ground THE END.

GravyMonster responds:

That isn't the end of the animation. It's 4:35 long. The file is just corrupted. Ditto with the horizon thingie.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Work is equal to the time spent on it.

An into would be good. Also, that whole first scene seems unnecessary. The background line is strange and jumps around in places. It also seems to run through the shins of the... giant? It's not very clear what's going on in the movie. It seems to have an extraordinarily huge file size for an simple animation that doesn't even have music or sound effects.

I think the best part of the animation was the stickman standing up. Hope you put more care into your animations in future. Take some time to script and choreograph. It is obvious that you can do better than what you have here.