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Kirby Fail

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My first flash, just wanted to try something out. Kirby fails epicly trying to find his way home.

This flash takes you through a few a games....... and a movie?

Vote honestly any suggestions will be taken into consideration

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AWSOME :3

Not bad, but...

This was a pretty funny, but your bleeps were way too loud. I turned the volume down a ton and they were still pretty loud. Next time try to keep everything on the same volume level. Keep up the good work.

flashmasterstudios responds:

thankyou for being honest.
I will take all of these comments into consideration like i said
I will try to improve voice quality and keep all sounds on the same level on my next animation.

Kirby was lost...

Pretty good for a first flash, not half bad art and animation, just refine some the animation, its slightly choppy, and work on your art a little, just smooth it out. Just keep on keeping on, and you'll be fine.

not that bad really

very impressive, first or not.

however, the voices were 2 quiet and the beeps were way to loud. thats the only thing i didnt like, but very impresive, keep it up

Good job

it wouldn't start :D

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Uploaded
Aug 22, 2010
6:51 PM EDT

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