Touching
Great job on the music and art
nuff sed.
Author Comments
I am really new to flash so be gentle. I did this for my friends. Let me know what you think.
Not bad
My only suggestion is that some of the text on the screen moved too fast. I had to watch it twice to catch everything. But I liked the art style, keep it up.
Lone-X responds:
Thanks! Yeah, I need to work on my timing skills.
Cool
A nice animation, with a good message. Really well done seeing as you're new to flash.
All you need to work on; is your drawing, and timing. other than that, a pretty good submission.
Good luck with your future submissions!
Lone-X responds:
TYVM! <3
almost made me cry
i can see you really have a talent for this, that almost made me cry, the way life is, and how cruel what people went through in life, which is why it turned them into hardened criminals, and the music that went with the flash, pure genius,
i say keep it up, you have a talent for this
Lone-X responds:
Thank you so much! I am going to keep at it! Live life in balance!
Short but interesting
For someone who is new to animation I think you did pretty good :) Keep it up.
One thing that i can't understand is why the file size is 5+ MB? Well, it is really short, right? Is it because of the music?
Lone-X responds:
I've made audio on here for newgrounds for years. Since I am new to flash, maybe I was supposed to use my music another way? Was I supposed to like, compress it? Thanks for the review!