Gone: Machine's Torment

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By the way, the actual title is "Gone: Torment of the Machine", but using all those of's and the's made it more than 25 characters, so made it less wordy for newgrounds.

Okay, so this took me about two months to animate, and the total running time in ten and a half minutes or something like that, so make sure you have some time before you start to watch. The audio may seem to be lacking in quality because I had to compress it in order to fit the movie into the 10 MB file size limit, so I'll add a link to the uncompressed file later.
...and by the way, there will be a sequel o this eventually (I have the basic plot right now, but no storyboards) to tie up the loose ends that this movie left.

Anyway, uhh, I hope you like it! :P

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Pretty awesome

It was slow paced at times, but the art is too eye candyish for me to care about that, the anymation, although lazy at times is great, and I see some techniques up there of which I dont remenber any popular artist ever using, really nice style of its own and involving story too, great work!

Too slow pace..


I see u got that vision to go for 'big shot' animation.. but I would first suggest u work on ur animation, from there, u can develope ur style. I can also see that u more into limited animation, which is fine. But again, try to improve ur animation and drawing..

I was once also excited about photoshop or any other bitmap/raster software, but I would tell u now, u got everything u need with the drawing tools in Flash.
Anyway, Im juz sharing my experience, cuz if u check out my old work, they're suckier than this..

So, I should juz giv advice, no heavy critic or shitty talk. :P

Good job. =]


Great graphics...

This movie is all about the facts of life. It's really good too, with the animations, plot and all come into play. Great movie :)


Im really not sure what to think of this. The backgrounds, the colours all look great.
But I cant help but feel that the frame by frame was a little mediocre compared to the rest. And some movements would have seemed a bit more alive if they┬┤re werent just tweened ( Mostly the part where he "blasted off" under the sea and when he jumped out of It". Overall It was good, keep practicing on FBF, because the art is already there.


nice work.

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3.86 / 5.00

Aug 18, 2010
7:04 AM EDT