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the side effects of pivot

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rated 2.36 / 5 stars
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Action
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pivotfight
animatonvsanimatio

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Uploaded
Aug 16, 2010 | 9:40 AM EDT

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Author Comments

by the way don't add any hate comments saying how bad i am, it is one of my first animations.
oh and sorry about the sign in the middle, it wont be in any of my other vids.
ty to everyone that commented all of your comments will help me in the future, oh btwto practice my animations i will be making lots of shrt(and probably original)flash movies,if it is a practice it will be noted in the commentry.thanks again and if you have any questions inbox me.

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Randomguy78Randomguy78

Rated 3 / 5 stars

not bad

but you've still got a long way to go, im not saying your terrible, in fact this is pretty good, for a first.
just keep animating, you'll get better.


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anEm8-or responds:

(this is a comment to everyone that responded)ty,your comments will help me in future animations


AqlexAqlex

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Um...Pretty good

For a pivot, it was pretty good, but the problem is that this has already been done many times, and in better ways. But besides that issue, this was decently animated, and I'm sure the more you practice, the better you will become =). Keep animating!


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SamsquinchSamsquinch

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

keep it up

understandable being on of your first animations that it doesn't look the greatest but for an newcomer it seems good in my opinion so keep it up


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Beefy-NinjaBeefy-Ninja

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

not bad

A bit unoriginal.
But good, Choppy in some parts though.
The text in the middle of the screen was anoying has hell remove it.


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GreencheekyconureGreencheekyconure

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Looks promising.

WelI Done: I thought you deserved a 6 for effort and for a first go it was brilliant.

Ratings:-
Animation:3/10
Style:5/10
Originality:2/10
Effort:8/10

Explenation:-
Animation: A bit choppy, try to work on walking and falling mainly.
Style:The fact that you took a picture of your own desktop rather than stealing an image off google was impressive.
Originality:This was what ruined it for me, the fact that the Animator vs Animation idea has been done too many times for my liking. Try something different.
Effort: This was'nt very well done in respect of length, about 32 seconds, but I know that you must have taken more than a day to do this, so you get an eight.

Criticism:Make sure you live up to your promise of getting rid of the middle thing. (oh and sorry about the sign in the middle, it wont be in any of my other vids)

Thanks,
Green.


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