Could use a little work.
I would like to start by offering some praise for this video before I get to the criticism. The animation is fairly decent especially if this is one of your first submissions, however the storyline not so much. It doesn't really make any sense that a man having his hand cut off causes the world to end. Perhaps if you can come up with a better story it could work better.
to be hhonest this was never meant as a flash that i was going to submit, it was for some collab that never happened so i thought i'll submit it and see what happens, i know its really not any good.