THAT was 9.3 mb...?

Well, it looks like you can use Flash to some degree, so I think you can get pretty good as long as you keep practicing. It'd be great if you moved up from stick figures, though. Now, my MAIN problem with this is the fact that it is 9.3 mb. This file should be...maybe 1 mb MAX! I don't know how you managed this, but I have a feeling it might be your audio. Read this tutorial, please: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /433864
take out any extra spaces that may have been added to that address.

Unoriginal

Stick fights + no character development + mediocre art + uninteresting conflict + wtf blue balls = amateur flash movie.

File size is HUGE for such a short animation

For such a long load time, I expected a video that would be much much longer. Also, the whole "stick fight" concept is extremely played out, and if you wanna make a successful one, it needs to be at a higher FPS and have better drawing/animation.

Nostalgia

That, for no reason, at all. Needed to be 9mb.
Brought back memories of back when me and my friends where like 13 and 14 trying to make flash.