I just get the feeling that you're going backwards here. I don't mean to offend, but the voice acting is getting worse and throwing the words at the screen in a poor version of "Dot Dot Dot..." doesn't work for this piece. Not unless you can make the animation of these words and letters a lot more all singing and dancing.
It's filler material that distracts us from the main plot and the whole impression is like a game that I play, when the person running it keep on derailing to head off on some surreal ramble, with no consequence. Editing is usually a brutal process, but you need to become more acquainted with it, when the writing has been finished. That's where you've been let down. Stop mentioning the place names so much and head for something that flows better. The narrator seems to struggle reading this, which is the first indicator that there's an issue, so look at a rewrite there. I've never heard of a cellar being anywhere but underground, so that's something that you're trying to drag out, as it seems from here.
Yes, the idea that Brutus has unleashed some sort of Pandora's Box upon Medralia is plausible, but did we really need to waste an episode on the back story? I don't think so, as it doesn't seem related to the story at all. With better writing later on in the series, perhaps you will actually make it relevant?
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