its ok
needs more story to it
and more fully drawn characters
i am not saying it was a bad movie
i am simply saying in my opinion i think it would be better if the characters had more detail
Author Comments
Made this with easytoon, edited with flash.
The first half is old, the second new. I added sounds from BF2, Oblivion, Pepper (generic combat, H2phys, FAsteps (from www.stonesbucket.com))
Plz give comments about the sounds!
weganic responds:
yeah, but this is what you call a 'stick figure animation', you should visit http://www.fluidanims.com/
NICE
NICE actioness but would be better if you can see em closeup
weganic responds:
yes, i could have added a v-cam
Not to bad!
That was not too bad at all, i thought it could of been longer. When i do think about it, it made me laugh and it had great graphics and sounds. This was a great way to start off my day, so i say it was great. :)
weganic responds:
lol, thanks for your comment- violence always makes our days
Amusing
Great sounds and well I had a laugh out of some scenes. So yeah. The ending was lol-worthy.
weganic responds:
thanks!
Not bad, but...
You could've used the script stop at the end and have a replay button that simply goes to frame 1 and replays.
Also, the name pop ups are kind of stupid. You could have a introductory intro where it introduces the main character (rambo, apparently) and make him stand out from everyone else.
weganic responds:
you're right, i should have made a replay button- but that does not make the animation stupid.
About the introduction thing: the first half is old and then i didn't call him rambo yet. Later, when the bowman comes, its new and you see his introduction after a short fight.
edit: i added a replay button!!! yay!!
