dude below me
slifer and obilisk aren't really Egyptian gods. oh yeah. the flash. it has accurate info, but bomkosh is right. this really has no business being on newgrounds
I learned everything from yugioh XD.
Were's oblisk, and Slifer j/k, when I first watched it I thought it was going to be all wrong information but it wasn't, there is actually more gods in the egyption faith but we could be watching for a long time though. Some work is needed to this one, but will give it a good review because it wasn't totally useless.
Since it was a draft I took it easy on Ya
Definitely needs music, and a narrator. I think your text moves too fast, and if you add a narrator, than maybe you could slow the text. Than maybe even some sound effects.
It's informative, but it seems that the animation was a bit lacking. Smoother animation and music, as you said, on the next draft, would make for a better Flash
your facts were accurate. as you said in your description this is a draft. I'm sure when you add music too it i'll be able too make it a little higer then this. You might want too think about making an actual animation involving the egyptian gods though.